Kaylie ([info]kayliemalinza) wrote in [info]sparrington,

Fic: Haunting in Thirteen Parts

Title: Haunting in Thirteen Parts
Author: [info]kayliemalinza
Rating: PG-13
Word count:1481
Setting: Directly after DMC
Genre: serious; drama


Haunting in Thirteen Parts


Norrington hanged a murderer who cried to God the night before his death.

But not in fear.

He was relieved, the man had said, because the person he killed kept watching him. He pointed to the corner and related every detail: the carved-out chest, the half-blue lips, the dark and vengeful eyes. In death, the man exclaimed, the ghost would leave him. God had promised it.

James saw nothing there but stone and broken mortar. He locked the cell and left.

* * *

His world was a tiny boat and shimmered strips of sea and sky. James held his jacket-front away from him, disgusted with the ceaseless pulsing of his second heart. When a ship at last discovered him, James imagined there were eyes in the shadow of its prow.

* * *

James unlocked the door to his house and saw Sparrow in the darkness near the stairs. His chest and thigh were pierced clean through; his skin was raw and blackened.

Ghosts, James was glad to note, did not drip blood on carpets.

"I do not regret it," he said.

Sparrow inclined a subtle nod; perhaps he smirked. He continued to stare.

* * *

James woke up from his first clean sleep in months and Sparrow was still there, staring. James watched his watcher as he sat up in bed. The only ghostly movement was a shifting sliver of white around black irises.

"It must be terribly dull," said James, "to watch someone sleeping." Sparrow's shoulders floated slowly up, as if that was the most insouciant shrug his altered state could muster. James slid from the bed. He stood in front of Jack. "Despite the admonition of God and law, I am grateful for the fatal consequences of my actions." He allowed a soft ironic smile. "You may lack the decency to remain completely dead, Sparrow, but you are blessedly still and quiet."

He studied the pirate with a thoughtful smirk, amazed by hair and skin that murked and rippled like an antique looking-glass. The gastric damage pulsed and faded in the corner of his eyes. Waving a hand through Jack's combative face gave no resistance nor proof of presence; James felt no goose bumps nor romantic chill. He laughed and went to his shaving. Jack tried to strike out with arm or leg, but he achieved nothing but a shadowed twitch.

* * *

Sparrow did not drift the streets with James, preferring instead to own the bedroom corner, the shadows of his newly-given sloop. James closed his chamber door upon the ghost, and opened his cabin door unto it. Jack turned his head more quickly than the day before, an almost-ape of living movement. His eyes were still unnatural and darkly lit.

"You were a pirate and a criminal," said James. "You committed crimes enough to hang a hundred times. That your execution took place in the ocean rather than at the gallows makes it no less just."

Jack shrugged, and tilted his head to watch James chart a course.

* * *

Sparrow claimed the only darkened spot in Beckett's office. James stood before the desk and averred his gaze, as Beckett tended to suspicion.

"Are my orders clear to you, Captain?" said Beckett.

James glanced at Jack, who raised a dreamy hand to Mercer's sleeve and passed it through, back and forth. Flesh and cloth and ghost. "Yes, sir," said James. "I shall do what I must." He had done it, he meant.

Jack smiled, and slid an arm through Mercer's chest.

* * *

From his hammock, James could not see Jack's stare.

"Given a second chance," he said, "I could devise a more dramatic treachery." He smiled and raised a hand, picking at the grubby under-nails. "I could steal the heart at sword point, and spill a pint of your blood upon the white Caribbean sand." He pulled himself up to peer into the shadows. Jack shook his head and James let out a sigh. "What if I then sold it for thirty pieces of silver?" Jack revealed a golden tooth and James lay down, knowing that was the best he'd do that night. He simply hadn't the taste for theatrics that Jack did.

* * *

The sloop's crew were dunces all, and all in Beckett's pocket. James' pocket held a bottle of rum, and he wooed it in his cabin.

"You're lucky," he said to his ghost. "You can't be made a chattel to anyone now."

Jack glared and pressed against the empty air composing his corner. He touched his lips, his belly and groin.

"You had more than your share of earthly pleasures when alive," said James, slurring slightly. "And I've no doubt this haunting is entirely your idea. You can disappear from my corner any time you wish."

Jack did exactly that.

James wondered if he was so drunk that he was no longer imagining things. Imagining ghosts.

"That didn't mean I wanted you to," he mumbled, and capped the rum.

* * *

Jack cavorted in every corner of Tortuga. Norrington walked the streets and saw Jack in the shadowed creases of alleyways, beneath the awning of a pawner's stall. He mouthed along to bawdy songs behind the tavern bar, switching corners if he felt James wasn't paying enough attention. This was unfair; Jack haunted the rum he could not drink and the women he could not woo more attentively than he haunted James.

James thought Jack had not followed him to the alley with the whore, but his eyes flew open at her cunny tricks and Jack was there. His eyeballs flashed and gleamed; he moved his hips in mimicry of James' coital endeavors. James rolled his eyes and persevered, and when he shrugged away the culminating shivers, Jack applauded.

* * *

Jack decided a round crow's nest could have a corner. He was a thinning fog in the sunlight; sometimes James forgot and stretched his legs into the ghostly chest. Jack wagged a finger and shifted down until his holes appeared to swallow James' feet.

"That's disgusting," said James, and waved a boot through Jack's wide grin.

But sometimes Jack didn't notice. He was staring at the ocean.

* * *

James laid down his dispatches. "What is it like?" he asked. Jack came into sharper focus; he tended to fade when he was bored. He tilted his head quizzically. "Never mind," said James. "It's a senseless question."

Jack shook his head, but there was no way for him to answer just the same.

"Is there something more than this?" asked James. "Some place beyond where you are?"

Jack studied the bulkhead. He minutely flexed his thumb. If he were careful, it looked like his nail was really catching in the wooden grooves.

"Why haven't you moved on?" James asked quietly. Jack flashed him a grin, and James waved a wry salute. "Take what you can," he said. "Give nothing back."

* * *

The morning they pulled into port, Jack was blurring at the edges. James didn't think much of it, didn't see Jack knit his brows at the sloppy mist where his fingers had been. Jack disappeared sometime during unloading, but James was concerned with the cargo in the hold, as well as the cargo hidden in his cabin, which did not appear on any ship's manifest. He had no time to dwell on eccentric ghosts.

James did wonder at Sparrow's absence from Beckett's office. Jack liked to mock the lord in ghostly pantomime; he would have been sympathetic about James' new orders. He didn't tease the shadows as James walked home.

James checked his body for wounds, skipped his dinner to see if he would hunger. He was sure he hadn't died.

Wouldn't he have noticed something like that? Wouldn't Jack have let him know?

* * *

In a month, James had sailed to Cayman, to Nassau, to Trinidad and back again. He'd stood on the deck of the Flying Dutchman and censured Davy Jones on behalf of Cutler Beckett. He'd trolled the pubs and whores of Tortuga. He'd sailed home to Port Royal and received new orders. He'd given up on Jack.

His four-man crew were exceptionally slow in re-stocking. They kept glancing at the battered galleon that had sailed into port that morning. Word was it carried a load of cryptic gold and a boastful captain with a feather in his hat. The crew included a serious slim man who kept a hand on the hilt of his sword, whose matelot was an even slimmer boy with curling honey hair. The matelot led the man towards the Governour's mansion as if they would be welcomed.

James did not look at the galleon. He had no time for rumours. He told the crew to be ready to sail in five minutes and went into his cabin, where the shadows were streaked with near-dusk light, but they were dark enough. The corner was again a sentry post with steady eyes.

"You're back!" cried James.

"That I am," said Jack, and stepped out of the corner.


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[info]bella_reeve

November 18 2006, 22:28:42 UTC 5 years ago

interesting... will there be more? Yes? Please more? Must know! I love Ghosty jack! e amuses me ^^

[info]kayliemalinza

November 18 2006, 22:31:17 UTC 5 years ago

well, there won't be any more ghosty!jack, 'cause he's not a ghost anymore!

[info]xchristabelx

November 18 2006, 23:12:07 UTC 5 years ago

Omigod. This is sooo good. Yes, please let there be more. This is really well done.

[info]kayliemalinza

November 18 2006, 23:15:36 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks sooooo much!

[info]riveroceansea

November 18 2006, 23:29:15 UTC 5 years ago

Ah, James is even stoic (almost) about Jack haunting him. I loved how you kept Jack in character without him saying a word. Good job! Can't wait for the next bit.

[info]kayliemalinza

November 18 2006, 23:36:13 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks! It was a fun challenge to do that when he couldn't talk or move, two things which identify him so much.

[info]lostwiginity

November 18 2006, 23:53:25 UTC 5 years ago

James thought Jack had not followed him to the alley with the whore, but his eyes flew open at her cunny tricks and Jack was there.
Doesn't invade people's personal space, you say? ôo

Love love love love love love... as in Smut smut smut smut smut, but much

[info]lostwiginity

November 18 2006, 23:53:49 UTC 5 years ago

P.S.: more in love.

[info]luntingsillily

November 19 2006, 02:10:41 UTC 5 years ago

Ohmygod. Sequel?!
* Squees *

[info]kayliemalinza

November 19 2006, 02:20:20 UTC 5 years ago

So uh, you liked it, eh?

You will be happy to know that I have 772 words of the sequel written, a definite improvement from 0 words 3 hours ago. Buuuuuuut it's going to be quite a bit longer to you'll have to wait a while.

But there will be a deleted scene posted in a few days.

[info]ophidiae

November 19 2006, 05:09:51 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, this was just wonderful, lean and crisp, with not a word wasted. Thank you for sharing!

I also hope you plan to continue, the Jack/James dynamic you've set up is just lovely.

[info]kayliemalinza

November 19 2006, 15:06:54 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad the style worked; I was worried that it was too stilted and spare, as my usual style uses much longer sentences and I get a bit clause-happy at points. It was fun to discipline myself; "No Kaylie, no commas! End the darn sentence already!"

I've already started the sequel, but it'll be a longer than this, so I'll be a while before I finish and post it. But there'll be a (clause-happy) deleted scene up in a few days.

[info]sinningia

November 19 2006, 09:36:19 UTC 5 years ago

OMG, I adored this. I'm so going to put this into my Memories.
Wonderful! Fantastically written, very intriguing and I loved the silent/not-so-silent communication between James and Jack. I really think you got them spot-on. It made me all sorts of happy. What a wonderful piece of fanfiction.

If I may be so bold- is there coming more? Pretty Please? I'd definitely like that ;-)

~sinningia~

[info]kayliemalinza

November 19 2006, 15:10:05 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you thank you thank you! It was so much fun to make Jack be silent and stuck in corner and still Jack. It makes me all sorts of happy that you think I got them spot-on. ^_^



And yeeeeees there'll be more, but the sequel will be much longer (yay?) so it'll be a while before I'm finished writing it. But comments like this definitely spur me on!

[info]callili

November 19 2006, 16:48:30 UTC 5 years ago

oh my god, how wonderfully beautiful!
loved loved loved the ending, the whole concept of ghostly jack haunting norrington... so very fascinating :D
thanks for this beautiful little story!

[info]kayliemalinza

November 19 2006, 16:50:26 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you so much, and you are so welcome!

Ok, show of hands: who wants a ghostie!Jack in their bedroom corner?

::starts to raise own hand, then stops:: actually it's kinda creepy. James is more hardcore than I am. O.O

[info]lilfluffykitten

November 19 2006, 19:10:52 UTC 5 years ago

That was lovely! You got the characters just right and there's a great interaction between Jack and James.

James checked his body for wounds, skipped his dinner to see if he would hunger. He was sure he hadn't died.

Wouldn't he have noticed something like that? Wouldn't Jack have let him know?


I loved this idea - that James had to check he wasn't dead. That's a plot bunny just waiting to pounce...
:)

I'm looking forward to the sequel!

[info]kayliemalinza

November 19 2006, 20:22:25 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks! I love character and interaction, so it's good to know iI did it well!


bwahaha plotbunnies....

[info]vous_et_moi

November 19 2006, 20:40:32 UTC 5 years ago

wowness. GREAT idea, loved Jack being all "Ah ha, I'm not dead, tricked you!" at the end there, bless his piratey bones.
and YAY for sequal, cant wait!

love n stuff
eL
xxx

[info]kayliemalinza

November 19 2006, 20:45:46 UTC 5 years ago

bless his piratey bones.
Is it ok that I imagined you saying this with an old-woman Scottish accent? Is that alright with you?

Thanks for commenting; I'm working on the sequel right now!

Well, actually right now I'm writing a reply to your comment, and before that I was at the grocery store, but in a minute! I am about to be working on the sequel!

[info]fabu

November 19 2006, 23:40:55 UTC 5 years ago

Wow - this is really well done. Evocative and subtle but with vivid little details that stick with me, and I love the way the vignettes build on one another.

::recs::

[info]kayliemalinza

November 20 2006, 00:02:42 UTC 5 years ago

Ooh wow, thanks! Good to know my details work for you and that the parts weren't too isolated.

::quietly preens::

Thanks again! I'm glad you liked this!

[info]fabu

5 years ago

[info]what_evil_lurks

November 20 2006, 06:39:30 UTC 5 years ago

I always enjoy your stuff. Kinda scarey to think you're only twenty and yet so weird (and I mean that in a GOOD way). I think you should give up your studies and become a fulltime fan fiction writer (just keep on the units of study that support development of writing). Cos then we'd get the sparrington goodness all the time. Oh yeah, slight problem with having no disposable income but I'm sure a girl of your imagination could come up with some way around that.

I'm really looking forward to the deleted scene.

[info]kayliemalinza

November 20 2006, 06:46:05 UTC 5 years ago

DUDE IF ONLY I COULD.

Actually I wanna write original novels for a living, so writing fic is advancing my career. Nifty, huh?

[info]vintage__cherry

November 20 2006, 20:26:46 UTC 5 years ago

Squee!

"Jack liked to mock the lord in ghostly pantomime"
Why have I got the image of Jack as widdow twanky?

[info]kayliemalinza

November 20 2006, 20:34:27 UTC 5 years ago

I looked up Widow Twanky and discovered that Ian McKellen played her in London two years ago and now James has the ghost of Gandalf in his corner. And it's Gandalf the White, with the glowy staff and everything, which is very annoying when James is trying to sleep.

Gandalf does enjoy Tortuga, though.

[info]demonqueen666

November 20 2006, 20:37:49 UTC 5 years ago

Eee...how in the world can this possibly be so creepy and bittersweet and yet kind of romantic at the same time?? I think I have issues.

But you are very very good writer. Yes.

[info]kayliemalinza

November 20 2006, 20:48:12 UTC 5 years ago

I win!

I'm sooooo glad you picked up on all of those things, because I intended them all, yes I did. ::happyhappy::

[info]komodojo

5 years ago

[info]authormichals

November 20 2006, 22:12:51 UTC 5 years ago

Know what this reminded me of? A Hayao Miyasaki film, it's got that lovely mix of supernatural and real and that strange detached feeling. Wonderful job, the whole is very well written.

[info]kayliemalinza

November 20 2006, 22:21:12 UTC 5 years ago

I LOVE MIYASAKI! I totally wrote my term paper on Spirited Away. *^^*

I don't know if it was a deliberate or direct influence, but I've always loved the double-edge of things, of sweetness mixed up with creepiness, the shifting horizon between world and real.

ok was totally a poet wanker just now.

Thanks for commenting!

[info]fairlyironic

November 24 2006, 14:44:53 UTC 5 years ago

It's interesting how even a Jack who can't speak still manages to get under Norrington's skin. I hope that you continue this, I'm really curious about what happens next :)

[info]kayliemalinza

November 24 2006, 15:42:25 UTC 5 years ago

Well, he's Jack! It's really fun to play with keeping him in character when the most obvious and fun indicators of his character are prohibited, so to speak.

His speech and movement are only 2 of those indicators; there's plenty more to strip. Soooooooo yeah a sequel in the works. :) I make no promises about when it'll be finished, though! (but bug me about it, that helps. >D)

[info]the_grynne

November 25 2006, 01:03:04 UTC 5 years ago

...and stepped out of the corner.

LOVE! So much love. Gorgeous and spot on Norrington voice. Even more love because you gave it a hopeful ending.

[info]kayliemalinza

November 25 2006, 02:06:27 UTC 5 years ago

Whee! ::rolls around in the piles of love::

I'm always glad to hear I did the voices well. Norrington and Jack are particularly hard, aren't they?

Thanks for commenting!

[info]amorettea

November 26 2006, 04:40:15 UTC 5 years ago

Uttery brilliant, in both concept and execution! Brava!

[info]kayliemalinza

November 26 2006, 04:42:04 UTC 5 years ago

::bows:: Thank you, thank you!

[info]betteroffvivid

November 30 2006, 19:30:30 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, that was lovely.

Can't wait for more.

[info]kayliemalinza

November 30 2006, 19:39:09 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks for commenting!

I *am* working on it, I promise. Which is no guarantee that I'll be working on it later, but it leaves the door open for hope, doesn't it?

[info]i_sudoku

December 10 2006, 03:02:01 UTC 5 years ago

It is good!

You do write non-crack quite well as well.
I should write something more meaningful comments here but off to have my lunch now. So the final part was when Jack was not dead anymore but still haunted him *g*

[info]kayliemalinza

December 10 2006, 10:22:55 UTC 5 years ago

Re: It is good!

Thanks!

Did you hear that? I hear the rumblings of a far-off sequel... And it's heading this way!

[info]i_sudoku

5 years ago

Anonymous

December 13 2006, 20:39:53 UTC 5 years ago

this has inspired me so much I cant get it out of my head. Please update.

[info]kayliemalinza

December 13 2006, 21:35:05 UTC 5 years ago

Well, the sequel is coming along pretty slowly (especially during finals, ick!) but if you're so inspired, why don't you try your hand at some fic yourself? I'd love to read it. :)

[info]xiilnek

July 22 2007, 04:48:16 UTC 4 years ago

Yay.

Do you mind if I tell you that I love you? Because I do. I adore your writing style, and characterization, how you use one to portray the other, and everything about this story. I don't think I've ever liked a short-ish (compared to the length I usually read) story so very, very much.

Thank you much for writing this. I added it to my memories just a moment ago.

If there is more, I will likely be delighted to read it. If not, this is a marvelous one-shot! I was expecting the ending to be sad, but then there was that turn around! Wow!

*wiggles happily*
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